Nowadays many business meetings and trainings are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages in this matter ?

Evidence-based approach suggests that a growing of information technology play a pivotal role in revolutionizing in various fields of industries, in particular, business. Although there are a cascade of advantages accruing to users, the drawbacks got involved in this trend are by no means negligible. Admittedly, I believe that online business meeting and training should improve owing to a number of compelling reasons. In this write-up, we will elaborate pros and cons of training and meeting online business.

On the downside viewpoint, the most rational justification is that such way of communication is dependent on electricity, computer and network. This technique, simply put, can overshadow the user's performance level by a hardware problem or fluctuation in electricity. Take a senior employee as an example; who after a relentless attempts shows an initiative and because of it try to get the promotion by setting up an online meeting. his/her performance is tremendously dependence on the Internet, electricity and network. If happen every problem, all his/her attempts will be gone. Moreover, lack of knowledge for using some Apps or formats can create terrible scourge.

However, advantages of online meeting and training are manifold. The most axiomatic argument is concerned with improved communication ability. That is to say, online meeting and training mode in the business industry offers a strong and effective platform for participants and communication between two or more remotely placed individuals or groups. Online conferencing, furthermore, lead to saving more time and money, especially for team members who are busy and located in remote area. Easy to access for stakeholders also is one the best thing about online conference.

To conclude, thus after going through aspects of cons and pros of online meeting and training, using online meeting and training can be a reasonable fact. While there are some disadvantages like lack of knowledge and being dependent a number of devices, but its benefits of communication technique can bring far-reaching advantages such as save more time and money, improved communication ability and easy access for stakeholders.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in particular, such as, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55357142857 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19874993299 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3103984257 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.764705882 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221987738407 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702070602909 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693697706604 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133155056618 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606624229131 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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