Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs.
What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?
At present days more and more people have to encounter with younger contenders for the
same job. The aim of this essay is to investigate the issues which have contributed to
competition with young employees and also propose a number of ways to deal with the
situation.
Obviously, this is expected situation when elder people have difficulties with competition with
the youngers, but it causes problem with massive unemployment among this part of
populace. The more unemployment rate, the more expenses government have to make to
keep the financial stability in the country. Moreover, younger employee provide more abilities
to study new skills for particular work, but, at the same time, they have not enough
experience, only theoretical knowledges about working process. And this issue sometimes
lead to unproductiveness in the compony. Less objective, but the most widespread thing is
influence on health. Elder people, for instance, after firing may not continue to keep brain
activity at the same level that lead to enormous changes in the nervous system.
Stupendous government spendings on transfers to unemployed people may be covered by
changes in taxation system. On the other hand, this solution would also exacerbate
emotional climate inside the country. There were examples in the history when higher tax
lead to mass disorders. At the same time, health issues should be eradicate by special
medical treatment and educational activities such as free pass in libraries, certificates for
educational programs and etc.
In conclusion should be mentioned that situation with competition between young and elder
people lead to wide range of issues in economic, political and medical systems, however,
people have already find possible solutions.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 67, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eradicated'?
Suggestion: eradicated
... the same time, health issues should be eradicate by special medical treatment and educa...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 22, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... certificates for educational programs and etc. In conclusion should be mentioned th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 21, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
... systems, however, people have already find possible solutions.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59706959707 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85307308531 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7395072152 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.538461538 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337012613835 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10741637718 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997042227694 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876468772201 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780425207112 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 67, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eradicated'?
Suggestion: eradicated
... the same time, health issues should be eradicate by special medical treatment and educa...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 22, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... certificates for educational programs and etc. In conclusion should be mentioned th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 21, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
... systems, however, people have already find possible solutions.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59706959707 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85307308531 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7395072152 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.538461538 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337012613835 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10741637718 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997042227694 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876468772201 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780425207112 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.