Nowadays, parents are allowing their children to use tablets and smartphones to enhance learning.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
The mode of obtaining education has changed to a greater extent with the Influx of technological advancements in recent times. Children are being encouraged to access electronic gadgets such as tablets and smartphones by their guardians for a better learning experience. Positives and negatives of the usage of smartphones in children education will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Children have the advantage of getting world-class educational content in their hands by a plethora of applications available online. Youtube, Amazon kindle are a few applications that provide audio, video, and written content in any field of interest from the pioneers in those particular fields. Secondly, Students tend to get a better understanding of the information that is taught in their schools by supplementing with the resources available online.
On the other hand, Gadgets usage has disadvantages to those people who spend more time with it. For instance, children those who are known to have higher screen time with their gadgets often develop vision problem, such as short-sightedness, dryness, and irritation of the eye. In addition to this, Smartphone addiction is also a major concern in recent times but it is not getting enough awareness and consideration like other health hazards. In the meantime, children are spending little time being physically active and engaging in a physical relationship with parents and friends.
To conclude, children are blessed with the best quality content available anytime to improvise their knowledge by making use of advanced gadgets. However, the devestating side effects experienced by those children, in means of both physical and mental health outweights its advantages. Hence, by following limited usage of gadgets and allowing enough duration for external stimulation, like sports and exercise, shall be used in future for the betterment of the children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56849315068 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07039599757 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9856959346 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.076923077 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208466580187 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694368669938 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501827353053 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117053312481 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292101705996 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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