With the development of contemporary technology and the internet, we have access to search for antique things and great works of well-known artists. But this does not mean that museums and art galleries are useless.
It is undoubtedly that we can find the pictures online which drew by famous painters.
Although the computer can partially satisfy basic needs, museums and art galleries can provide people beyond this. Museums and galleries represent the history and culture of a nation, which enable people back to a certain historical period and feel the history of that time. By this I mean, it is more real than just look at pictures online. More importantly, it provides opportunities for teenagers to study history and enhance their sense of responsibility. In addition, museums and art galleries attract tourists all around the world and promote culture communication between different countries. Consequently, it will contribute to tourism as well as economic development.
In conclusion, it is necessary to reserve museums and art galleries to exhibit antiques and works of art for the public.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, well, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35428571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96041916503 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622857142857 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3944439681 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227325420588 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085005841837 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743942255506 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125717634732 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684747762347 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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