Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has Technology affected the types of relationships people make
Has this become a positive or negative development
Our life has changed a lot because of the development of technology, and the ways people communicate also have a big progress. However, this essay discusses about its positive and negative affections.
The innovation of internet and mobile phones make it possible for people communicate with each other so easy that people can talk to some one anytime or anywhere. For example, if you have an urgent matter to tell your friend, you can call or message him directly, which your friend will get the information in a flash. In addition, people from different nations and regions are connected by the internet so that they can have a better understanding of the culture from different places.
Nevertheless, this seems to be a improvement for the mankind but it also has brought some negative effects to people. For instance, some people are so addicted to the internet that they become estranged from their relatives and friends, they spend more time in the virtual world than reality . Of course, some students who are addicted to the video games not only make their study worse but also do harm to their physical and mental health, this becomes a serious problem among teenagers these days.
But weighing up the pros and cons, technology has made our surrounding world become smaller and human being are getting closer to each other. A commonly held belief is that the development of technology’s advantages is far overweight its disadvantages, and this article also holds the same opinion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: big progress
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71625919235 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618473895582 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4354468535 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26141251259 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095313640074 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632883904242 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153153619486 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608937447131 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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