Nowadays , women as well as men work full time. Therefore, women and men should share household tasks equally. ( eg cleaning and looking after children ).To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, both men and women can have full-time employment, so there are different views about whether women should take charge of the entire household chores like in the past . To me, I completely side with the opinion of distributing domestic tasks evenly among family members.
To begin with, sharing housework would help enhance family relationship. When people cooperate to solve problems, they often tend to take the tasks that they have the ability to do. For example, females can be superior in terms of cooking, while males prefer repairing house furniture. In this way, husbands or wives can discover their partner’s strengths and weaknesses. Therefore, people can learn more knowledge and skills from other family members, also help them overcome their imperfection. Not only that, sharing housework may be a good way for people to confide after a hard-working day. While doing those chores together, they can discuss their experiences, problems at office; reversely, they can receive words of advice, encouragement from their partners.
Furthermore, if a person, generally a woman, who works full time, have to handle household tasks alone, she may become overwhelmed, which leads to several problems. First, those people would feel unequal why they are occupied with various kinds of housework, while their partners are relaxing or engaging to other things despite the fact that they both come home after a hard working day. This may lead to conflicts between family members. Second, people have the same amount of time in a day, so handling both housework alone and full-time employments means the amount of burden they are put on is much greater than the others. Gradually, they may get stressed out at both office and their home, which may results in health asthenia.
In conclusion, unlike in the past when men used to be the sole breadwinners, and women took responsibility of household tasks, today, members in a family should share those tasks equally to enhance mutual understanding and prevent unfortunate consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...entire household chores like in the past . To me, I completely side with the opini...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... a person, generally a woman, who works full time, have to handle household tasks alone, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24390243902 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71578123315 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5640639747 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170510734993 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543985794566 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673752619183 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130286741251 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649632831587 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.