The number of old people is increasing in many countries. Some people think this causes problems, whilst other people think that old people have an important role to play.
Discuss both views
Old people have been playing a vital role in our society for centuries. Some individuals believe that the increasing number of the retired entails many issues, while the others consider them as an essential part of our lives. This essay will discuss arguments that support both viewpoints.
On one hand, humans after retirement require additional medical care and financial aid. Since their personal incomings are usually too low to provide an appropriate healthcare, the government ought to render old people. Therefore, federal budget enlargement is necessary, meaning that taxation is also to be increased. For example, about ten percent of Germany’s taxes are spend for pensions, making social security of the old exorbitantly expensive for tax payers. Thus, the economy cannot be boosted on its maximum potential while a lot of people need to be supported.
On the other hand, retired people have lived much longer than others and have obtained a valuable experience that they can share. During their lives, humans face a huge number of challenges, which solving makes them wiser and providing with new knowledge. Hence, human beings that live longer are often have more expertise in various areas. For instance, most of presidents on the planet are usually much older than average citizen because they are more experienced. In other words, the old are a great source of information that society must not ignore.
In conclusion, retired people require many financial resourses causing problems to the economy. However, they are a rich source of necessary knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...bout ten percent of Germany’s taxes are spend for pensions, making social security of...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the presidents') or simply say ''most presidents''.
Suggestion: most of the presidents; most presidents
...pertise in various areas. For instance, most of presidents on the planet are usually much older th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.328 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64756491894 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2544393592 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273570117319 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802010479175 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084109940393 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174523406147 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851358255461 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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