The numbers of refugees and immigrants is increasing. What are the possible causes and effects of this? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays more and more countries are suffering from great numbers of immigrants and refugees. There are plenty of reasons of this problem, which will be described in the next paragraphs.
Firstly, one of the effects is the lack of workplaces. The residents of this country might have the difficulties to get a job, and intelligent immigrants often face the problem to obtain the necessary jobs. Immigrants and refugees have more troubles, because most of them don’t know the local language, rules of hiring and many other difficulties. In addition, some of employers are not willing to take responsibility for the refugee. To solve this problem, Immigrants have the right to get a suitable work or unemployment benefit with supporting of the government, that is why the countries have to create the various refugee assistance programs to help those people.
Secondly, the big number of refugees can lead to the territory pollution. Pollution of water, air, soil deteriorates the environment and increases the incidence of the population. The spread of various types of allergies and chronic diseases is the result of the chemicals present in air, water and foods. Also, residents need housing, thus the government builds new dwelling places. Hence deforestation and drainage of swamps will begin and cause the suffering of animals. To solve this problem, the state must send immigrants to sparsely populated regions.
In conclusion, we summarize that the moving of refugees and immigrants leads to the lack of work and the environmental problems. There are solutions to these problems such as the assistance programs and the direction of people to sparsely populated places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the employers') or simply say ''some employers''.
Suggestion: some of the employers; some employers
...d many other difficulties. In addition, some of employers are not willing to take responsibility ...
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Line 9, column 385, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... government builds new dwelling places. Hence deforestation and drainage of swamps wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34831460674 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95403779037 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2598312033 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177351149633 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518416630712 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395431426718 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099284384608 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287411708731 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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