The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It true that some argue the older generations’ views have become outdated and unsuitable for younger generations to prepare for their future. Although I agree that some are too traditional, I believe the others are still useful and necessary.
On the one hand, there are some notions of previous generations now being old-fashionable. Firstly, in the past, people insisted that students should learn some key subjects to pursue certain occupations such as doctors, professors or lawyers. With time, nowadays youth have the chance to chase their passion in other fields of society and the opportunities seem more variable and diverse than before. Secondly, the traditional belief about overestimates men above women has been unacceptable and irrelevant in the new world. Moreover, if older generations were likely to control and set up a marriage of their children, now young would choose the life partners on their own.
On the other hand, there are some traditional values that youngers should foster and not be forgotten. The sense about the community and the vital role of the family that the senior established still have a powerful impact on modern life. In fact, younger generations with busy work are often far from home and even become isolated and selfish. In addition, in order to integrate into the globalization, youth should stick in the characteristics of good manners and behaviors that elders who speak from experience give advice. Finally, the traditional believes also ensure to preserve the culture, which teaches young about their originals.
In conclusion, while there are some irrelevant ideas of older generations, youngsters should not negate all of them but nurture the traditional values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34191176471 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91196662624 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4995255065 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.769230769 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287644249774 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879242871947 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544605586874 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169847618554 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425098718194 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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