One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?
With the economic growth, the world has witnessed the development in the medical field which brings various effects to humans. The notable impact of this improvement can be mentioned is to long lasting people’s life expectancy. Although it still brings a negative consequence, the advantages of this development will outstrip its drawbacks.
Standing on the negative side, it is undeniable that the older people are, the more risk of getting diseases they have. When humans are over 65 years old, their health resistance will be weakened which then is the opportunity for bacteria and viruses to attack. Especially, during the covid 19 pandemic, older people are prone to get the virus than the young because of weak health with many background diseases.
However, the benefits are still believed to outweigh the disadvantages of the increase in lifetime. Firstly, despite the high age, older people are able to support their children in many ways. For example, they can help to take care of babies which reduces the burden for their children because they are too busy with their work everyday. Moreover, the help of oldsters in houseworks and teaching grandchildren etiquette and culture are really appreciated. Secondly, the government can benefit from the elderly. Older people can be more productive due to the increase in retirement age or hiring for non-labour jobs. In Vietnam, for instance, after retiring from their former jobs, many senior people tend to work at commune people's committees.
In conclusion, in spite of the drawbacks of long life expectancy, I believe that the upsides still get over these harms.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24427480916 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71584129717 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7783128768 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128923118807 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448611488219 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419150571676 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677527880993 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339819640002 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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