Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required?
Thanks to the technology development, there are various convenience are brought to people which is that development's products. Online shopping is not out of the line, it plays an important role in our daily lives especially the Covid-19 makes people avoid to go outside to protect themselves from the disease. In this essay, the effect of online shopping cause to our environment and employment will be described.
Firstly, online shopping impacts environments with both positive and negative aspects. The good side is the greenhouse gas intend to decrease due to the reduction of vehicle travels which people need to go to the shopping malls or restaurants and come back to their house or workplace. In this situation, a shipper also known as shipping man can take the shopping items such as food, convenient tools, clothes, etc. to one home and then receive another order at the shop near you and repeat the process. Or he can receive mass orders at one mall then transfer to people's home which is near with each other in order to minimize the travel distance. Secondly, more jobs can be create as the result of more orders are made by customers day by day. According to one finance company, in Vietnam, the quantity of high-tech shipper increase with a good view for several years which mean a large number of employment is produce. Last but not least, people can easily compare the price, quality, model of the items. Then, customers can choose rightly what they want at one place instead of going to each shop to select.
On the other hand, beside the good, there are some drawbacks. For example, every items need to package which can cause the over packaging and product massive amount of waste to our environment. Moreover, the quality of the product such as food can be decrease due to transporting or breakable goods have a higher chance to be broken because of the rush while transporting. The next problem is the quality of the online cargos may not be true with the ones shop owner shows people. And the struggle happens when people cannot exchange the merchandise and return their money back.
In conclusion, the online shopping trend effect our society with both beneficial and unfavorable perspectives that people need to solve when they are shopping on the Internet. With a wise decision of people, I strongly think that online shopping trend will bring the bright light to our world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid going', 'avoid gonna'.
Suggestion: avoid going; avoid gonna
...es especially the Covid-19 makes people avoid to go outside to protect themselves from the ...
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Line 2, column 564, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...ass orders at one mall then transfer to peoples home which is near with each other in o...
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Line 2, column 724, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...s the result of more orders are made by customers day by day. According to one finance co...
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Line 2, column 881, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... good view for several years which mean a large number of employment is produce. Last but not lea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86341463415 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53686208622 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556097560976 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6653373223 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.947368421 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5789473684 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188747296917 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613681588674 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693082793361 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133487104139 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653842773807 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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