In order study at the university students are required to extensive tuition fees Not all the students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

In order study at the university students are required to extensive tuition fees. Not all the students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fees for higher education are rocketing nowadays so according to some people, tertiary education should be accessible to everyone without fee. In my opinion, I agree that higher education should be free for everyone because it is going to greatly benefit society and individual.
A good reason for abolishing tuition fees is that it going to reduce discrimination from the society. As an illustration, many talented people in the world are really poor but owing to lack of proper education they do not get the chance to showcase their talent. For this reason, discrimination between poor and rich are increasing day by day. A tuition fee tertiary education will going to decrease the discrimination between them because it gives everyone equal chance to go ahead in life.
Tertiary education should be free for everyone because it will improve the academic performance of the students and will keep them more focused. To give a clear example, In the UK almost three quarter of the students have to do part time paid in order to pay their tuition fees. Owing to this reason, they are unable concentrate solely on academic work and which significantly affects their grade. Education without fee will solve this problem and students will obtain better academic performance.
Finally, university education should waive tuition fee because it is going to greatly benefit individuals and society. Tuition waiver gives everyone access to the education that means the society is building more potential man power. These educated people will bring more economic benefit with their thought, research and work which will ultimately benefit the society.
In conclusion, university education should be tuition fee because it gives everyone equal chance to go forward in life and it will greatly benefit society.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'fees'.
Suggestion: fees
...ch are increasing day by day. A tuition fee tertiary education will going to decrea...
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Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
.... A tuition fee tertiary education will going to decrease the discrimination between ...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...hree quarter of the students have to do part time paid in order to pay their tuition fees...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, so, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24567474048 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70468296147 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487889273356 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.2812495528 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288412800434 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112669299267 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696767647134 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180124100704 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495717953446 0.056905535591 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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