It is generally considered that parents and mentor make numerous discipline for toddler to boost for good habits and save them from the risks. While youngster would profit from fever rules and large liberty. I firmly accord with the said notion and will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with view of disagreement that kids are under pressure and they get irritate. To explain it, when they follow the rules every time they get irritate from their life and they are under pressure and so stress every time. so, with this they can not doing their work properly. Also they can victim from some disease. hence, they will loose their life.
Shifting towards view of agreement, with this all rules they get respect from all individuals. To elaborate it, when they talk very nicely to each other and they will very punctual of their work and in the life. so, all the persons will give the respect. For instance, a survey was conducted by the japan company found that all their guards get respect from all employees because of their good attitude and talking nicely. As a result, they can help with each other in difficult time.
furthermore, they can get earn more money and successful in their life. In other words, when they are work in any company with their rules and they will respect their employer. They are soon successful in their life and they will get promotions and earn the more funds. To epitome, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that in 2016 many workers got the post of manager because of their best attitude. Thus, they can save their money for their bright future.
To conclude, although children get stressed and irritating from rules yet it is good for their future and get respectable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, while, for instance, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85761589404 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28780151847 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0535087626 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2105263158 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139236977516 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568061428407 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565611139551 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117694300163 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700534023986 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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