Parents should control the amount of time their children spend on the internet.
Nowadays, children can access the internet in many ways, and then they spend a long time on it. This essay will agree with the view that parents should manage the time that their children spend on the internet, Spending excessive time on the internet could be wasteful and it is unhealthy for children’s physiological and mental health.
First of all, children waste time on the internet and then they do not have enough time to study. Furthermore, children have to finish their homework before they play games on the internet. In addition, children should spend more time to explore the outside world and make friends in the real world. For example, before the internet became common teens and children joined sport clubs or social groups in extracurricular activities. However, now they spend more time on social media and online games. Therefore, parents should limit the time that children can use the internet and encourage children to play outside.
Secondly, overusing the internet is unhealthy for child’s body and mind. Children access the internet by using any technology product which has a screen. It is harmful for children’s eyes if they watch the screen for a long time. There are many young children, who often use products with a screen, and as a consequence in the twenty-first century are wearing glasses, Moreover, children have started to rely on the internet. They want to be heard and seen on a social media. For example, they spend more time posting on Facebook, because they want to attract people’s attention and receive ‘likes’. If they do not achieve their expectation , they feel disappointed.
In conclusion, parents should spend time to discuss this issue with their children and manage the time used on the internet. This is because it will have many negative results if children spend too much time on the internet. Controlling the amount of time will help children experience a natural childhood and experience benefit in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15950920245 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81524341551 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490797546012 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3387953082 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.532650511294 0.244688304435 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185801401642 0.084324248473 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132128316091 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.401907656305 0.151304729494 266% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140178007932 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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