In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous. What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves?
In recent decades people witnessing that sports are becoming more powerful than before and because of trend is changing from past to present, however, sports persons nowadays encouraged by giving them jobs, money, and fame which they are deserve to be, despite that in old days situations are opposite, in this essay I will discuss what are the effects of these changes to the young generation and on the level of sports., In my opinion, the new policies are good to enhance the level of sports and a huge impact on the youth.
Firstly, The sportsperson are trained only in sports and they are less interested in studies after a certain age level they become dependent on others, so the idea of giving them jobs, money for their better work is appreciable, for example in Haryana there are many wrestlers they are earning gold medals for India and government provide them government and money, these activities encouraging other young blood to participate, another example in rural Haryana in past sports are not for girls but after watching movie Dangal on Phogat sisters many people interested to giving permission to their girls participate in sports. this is the change in young people after giving so many opportunities to the sports personalities.
Secondly, this fame and money and other gifts like jobs are good for enhancement in sports level as compare to past many people were thinking that sports are just a subject only a few people concern about it and in the case of women they are restricted for many sports but in recent years everything changing due to new policies, even though in schools sports students have the same weightage to other students, for instance, The Kabbadi which is a very famous game in Haryana and Punjab now popular in the world because of fame and sports persons earning money, so, these new changes positively affecting the sports.
In conclusion, motivation giving positive feedback in almost all situations, I totally advocate this giving prizes, wealth and jobs to the sportspersons making them more independent, motivating youth, and making a positive attitude towards sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04249291785 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59493796131 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509915014164 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 212.628690444 49.4020404114 430% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 356.0 106.682146367 334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.6 20.7667163134 340% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.2 7.06120827912 314% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226896209153 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130453155439 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390873110718 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134828841184 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384918700114 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.6 13.0946893788 287% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.43 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.3001002004 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.14 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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