Nowadays, usage of drugs, both allowed and prohibited, is becoming increasingly popular among the youngsters in the modern civilizations. It is argued by some sociologists that parents and surroundings are responsible for increasing drugs abuse. This essay will explain the main roots including parent negligence and easy accessibility and significant aftereffects containing mental and physical disorder and juvenile delinquencies of drugs usage. It will also suggest solutions: like awareness programs and ban on drug dealing, to solve the problem.
Juveniles are using drugs than ever before due to the carelessness from family. Parents have busy schedules and they do not have time to observe their kids’ activities and keep an eye on their peers. For instance, according to a survey conducted by Harvard University, almost 71% among the young drug-addicts were due to lack of attention from family. Another reason is that children can get drugs easily without being investigated by any drug store. In addition, drug dealers-hidden amid societies- are making the situation worse by providing drugs.
One of the severe complications is that the drugs are affecting both the brain and body of the addicts: without these drugs, victims cannot think and act clearly and properly. Another serious effect is that these addicts desperately need money to buy drugs; they might not have enough money which would lead towards offenses.
To eradicate this problem, the government should organize drug awareness and counseling programs regarding the harmful effects of the drugs. Parents also need to monitor the activities of their adolescence. Additionally, drug dealers must be arrested and punished.
In conclusion, increased numbers of teenagers are using drugs in today’s world due to the parents’ laxity and easy access to drugs; however, it has adverse impacts. Therefore, government as well as society should take measure to protect their young generation from this menace.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58552631579 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96563156307 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628289473684 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5361780525 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165428324257 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054340842215 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505754815582 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937772722184 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392392216422 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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