People are living in a “throwaway society”, using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?
It is widely argued that people are living in a “throwaway society” when they employ things for a short duration and then no longer using them. While a strong case of this view, some causes for this circumstance can be identified. Personally, I believe that people should understand problems that it results to understand profoundly.
In the one hand, the causes leading to this situation has two major reasons. One reason is that people do not acknowledge about consequence of throwing away when they employ it for a short time. Actually, people pay attention to other problems without environmental issues. Hence, they do not know about the drawbacks of only using once. As far as I know, environment channel always has the lowest hits in total yearly, approximately only 100 visitors per month. This proved that people almost neglect to natural world. Another reason is that this is a habit of users. For instance, Vietnam is considered as a “plastic bag country” because they overuse plastic bag when they go shopping. After employing it, they throw it away definitely.
In the other hand, standing in front of alarming situation, some problems are displayed. Only employing once could result pollution because the rubbish could not decompose. For instance, plastic bag compose of numerous bad component, hence when they throw it away, rubbish would turn into toxic for environment. Moreover, it has an effect on ecosystem because plants could not absorb nutrients to develop. Even some people throw away garbage at the wrong place leading to congestion and damaging health human. For example, water pollution issues become more and more popular due to its danger including diseases related to hand, foot and mouth.
In conclusion, I strong believe that people need to understand about the problem and causes in order to accelerate situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, moreover, so, then, while, even so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22259136213 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79975984729 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6427000973 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7368421053 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33928777536 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888914798513 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907531597759 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202672852816 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117241807496 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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