People living in big cities face several problems. What are these problems? What can be done by governments to solve these problems?
It is true that there are a number of problems that residents in bustling cities have to face with on their daily basis. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, the governments can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
The first reason people living in big cities is that residents have struggled with the high costs of living such as accommodations, expensive tuition fee of their children or even food. Secondly, these cities are ideal places to cluster a large number of industrial zones, so the crime rates are also increasing rapidly. The third pressure is that toxic gases from the use of vehicles are the main cause of poor air quality, which makes city dwellers suffer from respiratory diseases. Take Ha Noi capital as an typical example, this city has released the high amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere on a daily basis. As a result, urban life is more and more stressful and unhealthy owning to development of the industrial era.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to tackle these problems. To improve the quality of life, the government should create more job opportunities for inhabitants. This action can alleviate the committing crimes and support the labor force to pay for the expenditures. Additionally, the authorities need to properly distribute the balance between city dwellers and rural areas to promote economic development in remote provinces. Imposing the heavy taxes of commuters who use the private vehicles is essential to reduce the threat of environmental pollution. Furthermore, public transport system should be upgraded to encourage people’s participation.
In conclusion, despite coping with several problems when individuals live in the metropolitan areas, the governments could certainly conduct a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all city inhabitants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38383838384 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95855962979 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5488797083 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.214285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251610089844 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704747425787 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592288653362 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15243558927 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499463586632 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.