People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Nowadays, there is a need to build up facilities to accommodate the growth of the economy. Large city is not an exception. Investors put lots of money to build shopping mall, apartments... Hence, they create millions of job opportunity for people. That is why large cities are very attractive to people. Also, living in such places is very convenient in term of transportation, education, entertainment... However, there are some problems if you consider to move to big city.
First of all, everything is expensive especially real estate. Limited of spaces is the reason that people have to pay for overpriced property. For average, people have spent one-third of their salary for the rent in big cities such as Tokyo, Los Angeles or London. This money would go to their saving if they are willing to sacrifice their convenient lifestyle and move to smaller city or village. Moreover, if you think about buying a property, there is a headache financial math waiting for you. According to reality numbers from many banks, 20 to 30 years is the common time for people with well - paid job to pay off their mortgage. It sounds very demotivated and scary at the same time. For the reasons, lots of family with children consider to move to regional towns while the parents are commuting to work if they can not find job there.
Secondly, large city means big population and it comes with tons of wastes. Authority from those cities are trying their best to find the solutions. Until then, citizens have to suffered from this matter. Numbers of studies shows that air quality in big cites are polluted and under standard. Beijing is one of the typical example. Looking from the above, the city is surrounding with ball of air filled with chemical gas from factories. On the streets, there are thousand of cars and motorbikes releasing toxic smoke in the air every second. People living there have no choice but wearing charcoal mask protect their lungs. As a result, number of people who have lung problem grows rapidly.
Those problems mentioned above is not easy to tackle but it is not impossible. Government has played critical role in solving problems which occur in large city. City development department should encourage new company to build up their premise in suburb areas or regional towns. Therefore, people don't have to move to big city to find the job but just stay in regional townThis will help to reduce pressure in large city. Moreover, government should build up public facility such as public transportation, shopping mall, trading center, school...in regional town to make it looks more attractive to people. This will ensure that people can find their job and easy to get entertained in their free time.
In summary, we can not have a cake and eat it too. If you still want to live in large city with all convenient, you need to cope with lots of problem. Therefore, it depends on each individual preferences, so that they can choose the suitable place to live for themselves. But we can all hope the future prospective will be better with the supports of the government and achievements for the scientists.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 447, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider moving'.
Suggestion: consider moving
...However, there are some problems if you consider to move to big city. First of all, everythin...
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Line 3, column 739, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider moving'.
Suggestion: consider moving
...e reasons, lots of family with children consider to move to regional towns while the parents are...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...om factories. On the streets, there are thousand of cars and motorbikes releasing toxic ...
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...as or regional towns. Therefore, people dont have to move to big city to find the jo...
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Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
...h all convenient, you need to cope with lots of problem. Therefore, it depends on each individu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, third, well, while, as to, in summary, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 41.998997996 202% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2602.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 533.0 315.596192385 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8818011257 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64177988634 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519699812383 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 810.0 506.74238477 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 16.0721442886 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4435248107 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5294117647 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6764705882 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08823529412 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306553353705 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686281449855 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598967271192 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166653578157 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068993857513 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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