People spend large amounts of time and money on clothes, hairstyles and make up to change their appearance.
Is it important for people to be concerned about the way they look? What are the consequences of focussing on physical appearance?
There has been a phenomenal trend of wasting excessive amount of time and money on changing one's outlook by changing clothes, the style of hair and even make up. This essay will outline the importance of it in terms of people's trait and their relationships, as well as the possible results of this action.
By caring on their physical appearance, people can boost their self-esteem. Firstly, people are treated by the society in the way how they look in the public. For example, if people, especially women wear casual clothes on a daily basis, it might lead them to keep a low profile among their friends. Another importance can be that these people can increase their chance of making new relationships. For instance, many people suggest that making a first impression with fashionable hairstyles which is of imperative when two couples meet each other in a date would assist them to endure their relationship in the long-term.
However, it is also important that the consequences of this trend are not overlooked. The first drawback is that people are sparing no expense on their appearance. If they do not do so, most of them will be under depression in that this beauty requires the significant amount of money. Even though they do so, they are more likely to struggle with various of choices and they, therefore, can spend little amount of time with their family. For instance, when people are looking for new collection of clothes worn by celebrities, they constantly follow the ongoing trend instead of caring of their offspring.
In conclusion, physical appearance is of importance to improve self-confidence, not mentioned to long-term relationship. On the other hand, the consequences may have negative impacts on one's emotion and the relation between parents and children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0813559322 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85081722711 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4817923294 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.071428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404658841489 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121841805966 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460775796389 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208216018892 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665630860879 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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