People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
Nowadays, people have undergone the feeling of being intimidated when they are in even at home or public places. In my perspective, this issue sparks from the growth level of crimes within the community and the government should provide vocational education to tackle it.
Admittedly, citizens have a fear of unsafety due to several reasons. Firstly, criminals can deprive the asset that they are accumulating for ages. In fact, those who are unemployment usually embrace the path of being a thief to maintain their survival in society, and some stuff such as cell phones, laptops, and wallets could be their target on the account of the extravagant price if their owners have a loss of precaution at home or public places. For instance, in Vietnam, pickpockets, and robberies prevail in a big city such as since the habit of using cash and saving it at home is still prevalent. Thus, it triggers the sense of weariness and terror at residence places or other ones.
Therefore, the authorities should implement some measures to address it immediately. Firstly, they should have the provision of vocational institutes for the unemployed and offenders during prisoning. Thanks to education, these groups of people can have an opportunity to have a good grasp of knowledge and skills which are highly required when they engage in the labor force. Thus, they may have an occupation with special offers, improving their living standard, preventing them from recidivism, and ensuring career prospects in the future. To be more specific, in some countries, the government usually cooperates with companies to provide courses for those who commit crimes to facilitate their job opportunities afterward.
In conclusion, while the development of crimes in the community is the consequence of this due to the effort of offenders to maintain their lives, vocational education may be a proper and urgent solution for it since it improves their skills to qualify firms’ requirements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...e accumulating for ages. In fact, those who are unemployment usually embrace the path o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21698113208 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87654729604 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562893081761 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3241017713 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.615384615 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160340996913 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055926961979 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497190893447 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906460612089 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632087336093 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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