Popular events like the football world Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in the safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that sporting events like the football World Cup and other international sports events can contribute significantly to easing international tensions and can provide a platform for athletes to express their patriotism through their performance. I strongly agree with this statement.
Firstly, through participating in sports competitions, different nations can understand more about other cultures, and that helps promote a more friendly atmosphere between all nations. For instance, f Vietnam and China fought a war before, but now they forgot the past and both countries took part in the recent SEA Games.. Secondly, there is no distinction between developed countries and developing countries in sporting arenas. They are all welcome to participate in sporting events, and that shows proves that such events can enhance the friendship among nations.
Additionally, participating in international events also allows athletes to express their patriotism through their performance when they compete. For instance, some passionate sports people are highly devoted to their careers and spend most of their time spend almost their whole life training and practicing for the major international games., In fact, some people even suffer injuries to their bodies in their endeavour to get the highest awards, prizes and medals for their countries.
In conclusion, taking part in international sporting events and competitions is one of the best ways to help foster friendly international relations, as countries all around the world can get together and compete in a friendly manner, and athletes can demonstrate patriotism and dedication towards their countries in a positive and peaceful way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68482490272 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00963644823 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.410392458 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.333333333 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208082055425 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896394115425 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983689677131 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15566861587 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112880880214 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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