Elderly people are nowadays being sent to old aged homes rather than. being looked by a family in homes.
Do the advantages of old aged homes outweigh its disadvantages?
In today’s era it is increasingly common for families to put their parents in care homes rather than taking care of them at homes. Advantages of living in nursing homes are comparatively less than living with their families.
To begin with, the main benefit of elderly people are being sent in nursing homes is that most of the care homes are well equipped and full of modern facilities that are much demanded or needed by senior citizens. For Instance, senior citizens often face health related issues So, the presence of trained staffed for 24 hours a day is significant for them which provides sense of safety both for both the parents and their families. Moreover, residents of retired homes build a community that every member can feel a part of it. Taking part in social activities has positive impact on elderly people’s mental health.
Despite the benefits, there are some drawbacks associated with living in a senior home. Firstly, the main issue is that the assistant living facilities can be very costly as many people cannot afford to bear the expenses.
Secondly seniors are emotionally very sensitive, and they need love and support from their family but when these old parents are sent off to nursing homes no one can measure the amount of sadness and loneliness they feel. This is due to the distance created from the family and friends. For Example, the old people wait for festivals so that they can meet all the relatives. This is the best time for chatting, celebrating and reunion.
To conclude, although living in nursing might be beneficial for elderly people but I think that senior people should be respected and loved by their families. There have been so many good and useful things that these old people have done for their families, therefore their families should take care of them when they are old.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92012779553 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4518555228 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549520766773 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8324442167 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247442830981 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882327361488 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054539195912 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142261862865 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290379788756 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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