At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Now days, youth people are increased in huge numbers than elderly people in regions like India and china. In India for example; it holds record of having more teens than any other nations. The major advantage of a young adult is their contribution to the economy of a county as well as family whereas; the disadvantage is lack of experience. I personally believe that, advantageous of youth people dominating elder ones significantly outweigh disadvantageous.
Firstly, young generation people are asset for a nation. In fact without them a nation cannot move forward because they are accommodating the needs of a country in the form of providing workforce. In addition, they also provide innovative ideas which are vital for technological developments in a country for instance; they provide expertise for developing military weapons. Next in line is workforce for industries, I agree that older people used to work for industry in past for their development however, their memory power as well as energy for working is rapidly declining due to increase in the age. Because of those reasons adolescences people comes into picture where they can work for longer period of time and has great strength. By recording above examples, it is to conclude, youth people are significant for any country because of their working capability.
Secondly, drawbacks of youth generations is inexperience by this I mean, students who has earned their degree recently does not have zero knowledge about any field when compared with elderly ones. Another disadvantage is overpopulation, teens can have lot of energy but too much population can lead to unemployment as well as lack of resources in UK for example; according to statistics provided by government out of ten people only 3 to 4 has capacity to contribute to countries growth. Therefore, population of any age should be balanced for better growth of a nation.
In conclusion, some people claim that people at young age contribute a lot for a nation then elderly people. In my opinion, population of young adults having lot of logical thinking should contribute to their nation welfare as well as population of both young and elderly should be balanced
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Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15083798883 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96562813246 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558659217877 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5917966017 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.933333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7333333333 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110994548514 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424234032618 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281296674708 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787946115075 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307704849367 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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