At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In these days, there have been several nations where the number of youngsters outnumbers elders’ ones. Either benefits or drawbacks attached to such a phenomenon will be clarified as follows.
It is true that a population skewed to a younger age range could lead to some negative consequences. Normally, the presence of the elder purports to represent the backbone of discipline and traditional culture in a family. By this, the bonding between family members would become more close-knit and deeply sympathetic. Therefore, the shortage of older generation’s existence would be a significant loss of family connections. Besides, because elders offer a rich source of knowledge fully backed by vast hand-on experience so that we could gain from the wisdom and sophistication. For instance, parents usually convey valuable advice on resolving problems with their children. Another reason why the tendency of young people would be advantageous is that it can provoke several issues to human life. This is because the number of increasing youth might lead to a high rate of unemployment.
However, I am convinced that the upsides of the tendency outweigh the downsides. The main benefit derived from having a youthful generation is the growing economy. In other words, young people those are much more open-minded and motivated are willing to challenge new things without fear of facing difficulty. For example, more and more successful start-up projects performed by the young, which affirms the position of them in economic fields. Furthermore, thanks to the great vitality of youth employments those are able to work hard and withstand under the pressure in jobs than the elderly. Therefore, they can easily support the older generation by affording to social welfare and government taxes as well as taking care of their families.
In conclusion, I should concede that generation’s young adulthood does come with some adverse effects, yet the benefits created by it far eclipse the disadvantages. We should further promote the potential for youngsters and meanwhile, the government should take measures to lengthen the lifespan of elders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48656716418 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05581843153 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6099932705 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.111111111 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117094843729 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314526661409 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299842595767 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608847638837 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259331107814 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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