At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, in some countries around the world, a majority of the population is young adults, with a small portion of the citizens being elderly people. This circumstance brings some benefits as well as produces several drawbacks. However, from my perspective, I believe the advantages supersede the minor disadvantages.
On the one hand, it is indisputable that having a young population has some negative impacts on the country’s social affairs. First, the lack of older people is equivalent to the shortage of experienced workers, which directly affects the domestic economy. For example, since most of the citizens are young people, companies and corporates often struggle to seek and recruit skillful workers for managerial positions. Therefore, more money has to be allocated to setting up vocational programs, draining the public budget. Moreover, equal and fair education for every student is a real challenge for governments when having a large number of young citizens.
On the other hand, having more young people can provide some crucial benefits for society. First and foremost, there will be a huge source of workforce and laborers for the public. It is beneficial for a country to have strong human resources since it will lead to a creative generation with proactive mindsets and a high willingness to engage in challenges. As a result, productivity, as well as public competitiveness, will be enhanced. In addition, a lower rate of old people means less pressure being laid on the healthcare system. To be more specific, since young people are less prone to health problems and medical issues, the government’s budget will be used for other purposes regarding technological advancements and scientific research. This can contribute to human progress in general.
In conclusion, despite some trivial drawbacks of this situation, I do believe that the advantages outweigh the downsides for some aforementioned reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44039735099 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07549590442 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8751399251 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207771403617 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063858349002 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526286183051 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137896882361 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325326632322 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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