By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
You should write at least 250 words.
Crime, a term which in itself comprises many immoral and unethical things, which are not the requirement for any society. Death penalty, however, is considered as the harsh level of punishment for the people, who cross all the limits of humanity, which in turn deem as a bolt on humankind. Some, furthermore, believe that society is guilty of committing murder, hence life in prison is better alternative. Therefore, I partially accord with this statement.
To begin with, the death penalty is a justifiable punishment for those criminal who do brutal crime regardless of considering any value or humanity due to plethora reasons. Firstly, when any criminal or perpetrator raises a threat on national security and tries to disturb the sovereignty, then death penalty is a major tool for such crime. Secondly, the death penalty is a lesson for those who take the law very lightly and are in propensity to break laws irrespective of respecting it. Thirdly, sometimes fear is necessary to ensure reduction in crime rate, here death penalty is proved to be more viable in inducing a sense of frighten in culprits. For instance, It has been commonly found that many terrorists surrender themselves owing to fear of death penalty.
On the contrary, every condition has both positive and negative aspects, which is similar in this case. Death penalty, sometimes, deem as a harsh method of punishment for criminals on account of various reasons. Firstly, nobody wants to become a criminal, rather circumstances compel someone to become criminal, correspondingly, there should be given an another chance to everyone in the form of life imprisonment. Secondly, life imprisonment helps someone to lead a better and civilized life by giving proper counselling to them. Thirdly, the end of one life means the loss of many lives, which in turn indicates that death penalty for someone is just like bringing entire family under several crises, as a result all hopes for family disappear. Thus, life imprisonment seems noticeable alternative.
In conclusion, I opine that nobody wants to become a criminal, but circumstances are responsible for that, therefore everyone has right to have a second chance to live a great life ahead.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have given' or 'give'?
Suggestion: have given; give
...criminal, correspondingly, there should given an another chance to everyone in the fo...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a chance' or 'another chance'.
Suggestion: a chance; another chance
...al, correspondingly, there should given an another chance to everyone in the form of life impriso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27586206897 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87963725861 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58908045977 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1365982325 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6875 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223299146211 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765369310019 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632393165616 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128052237381 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730679943147 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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