In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
For decades, there has been a noticeable alteration among the family structure and parental roles. While certain changes are explaining this tendency, I believe that this has a positive impact on people’s lives.
Traditionally, people are accustomed to living in an extended family in which they are under the same roof with their grandparents and other relatives. Besides, the parental roles between fathers and mothers used to be breadwinners and housewives respectively. Taking Vietnam as an example, Vietnamese fathers are only responsible for earning money, while mothers just stay at home and look after their children. In contrast, mothers today can pursue their dream jobs instead of staying at home and doing households, whereas fathers<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="spouses "></span> can share various responsibilities with their wives. Additionally, they also tend to live separately from their parents and build their own family in a private house or an apartment.
Alongside the influence of this trend, I believe that this is beneficial to people’s lives. First, this directly eases the burden that mothers have to bear because they have to sacrifice her jobs to support the whole family. Furthermore, spouses now can find it easier to strike a financial balance due to the equality of sharing jobs. For instance, they can hire babysitters to look after their children while both focusing on the job at their workplace. Consequently, they not only gain financial stability but also experience a decent life.
In conclusion, while the changes have taken place in different areas for decades, I think these are a positive step, contributing to a better world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, so, whereas, while, as for, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5572519084 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54658000148 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625954198473 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.867549325 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103855646035 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404695619015 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565145793176 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094479678095 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754431261455 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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