When a town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When a new town is first introduced, governments should prioritize the development of public parks and sports facilities over that of shopping centers so citizens could spend their spare time in. In my opinion, I completely agree with this for two main reasons, which first it helps build a stronger community and second, it is beneficial for a better lifestyle among residents.
In terms of the community, public parks and sporting facilities increase human interaction among people. As they participate in different social events, which are mostly held in these areas, they have an opportunity to make new friends and find out lots of useful information that they have in common. For example, the marathon race, which is annually taken place in Ho Chi Minh city, has opened many avenues for local people to interact with others as a sense of communication. Thus, by making an effort to talk to as many people as possible, they could not only strike up a new relationship with others but also build a healthier and stronger community.
Apart from the benefit expressed above, the development of public parks and sports facilities also has a positive influence on a better lifestyle among residents. Most public parks today are designed and supplemented with high-quality exercising equipment, which has the potential to promote physical activity and to support an active lifestyle. The important thing is that they do not have to spend a considerable amount of time practicing on these facilities, instead, it normally takes about 15 to 30 minutes to finish. Thus, people, especially who have little break time, could take advantage of that to improve their physical health and develop a more balanced lifestyle.
In conclusion, when a new town is planned, it is of vital importance to develop public parks and sports facilities because of its advantages related to a healthy community and an improvement of health among residents.
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Suggestion:
...d a healthier and stronger community. Apart from the benefit expressed above, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16455696203 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86087851214 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566455696203 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.6285874227 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 148.363636364 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299968852885 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113461557796 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971626797563 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195378517348 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763658372372 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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