Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Some people say that we should give priority to such activities as reading books or doing word puzzles to relax. However, others think that it is of importance to do nothing in leisure time. While resting mind is occasionally essential for relaxation, I believe that we should engage in light activities.
According to some people’s perspectives, doing nothing is an ideal way that they could rest their mind in leisure time. This is because people could experience a sense of tranquility, which helps people to overcome negative emotions, especially after stressful working hours. For example, this type of relaxation is widely applied in most Vietnamese workplaces, allowing people to take a nap or do meditation before coming back to work. Hence, they become more energetic and active, which leads to outstanding performance and outcome.
However, alongside the influence of resting mind, I believe that participating in light activities such as doing physical exercise or reading books has a long-lasting effect on people’s mind. The main reason is that the majority of workers have recently spent eight hours per day in their workplaces, especially those who do paper jobs. This is thought to increase the susceptibility to various types of disease such as obesity, heart attack, and stroke. Nevertheless, taking a walk or reading books would help them to ease this likelihood and develop a more healthy lifestyle.
In conclusion, although some people spend their spare time to stay quiet, I believe that they should take part in such mentioned activities above, which is proved to be more fundamentally important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33590733591 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94900330681 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6240984291 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371882463735 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130273031585 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10952560732 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224672004633 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967013500691 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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