In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the country side. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole.
What are these problem? How might they be reduced?
These days, many developing countries have enhanced the quality of the life in some big cities in a fast way, but not in the suburban areas. This leads to some problems we need to consider to solve.
There are some problems which appear in both cities and the country side. Firstly, the development of big cities might lead to the number of people living in there dramatically increase, so the consequence is the lack of accommodation. Many people have to live together in a small house, which affects to daily activities. The amount of land which is used to build houses and buildings is larger than before, so some public places like parks, stadiums are narrowed. Moreover, the increase of population causes many problems such as traffic jam, air and water pollution, which has a detrimental effect on human health. Secondly, the country side is also impacted negatively by this situation. The serious lack of workforce in rural areas cause to waste land because the large amount of land which is vacated. In addition, the number of clerical workers such as teachers, doctors,…will be quite low in the country side because those people might prefer to live in big cities to have many opportunities to promote. Therefore, it will be unfair for many people in the country side.
However, there are some solutions to solve tis situation. Government should contribute to improve infrastructure in the country side to encourage the economic development. Additionally, government should urbanize suburban areas to encourage citizens to live in there continuously, so only in this way can help government prevent movement to big cities. Besides that, government can introduce the laws to support the life of people in country side.
In conclusion, beside the development of big cities government should also contribute to improve suburban areas, which enables government to prevent some problems which are happening.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fast way" with adverb for "fast"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... quality of the life in some big cities in a fast way, but not in the suburban areas. This le...
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Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider solving'.
Suggestion: consider solving
... This leads to some problems we need to consider to solve. There are some problems which app...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roblems we need to consider to solve. There are some problems which appear in ...
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Line 3, column 744, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wasting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wasting
... lack of workforce in rural areas cause to waste land because the large amount of land w...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r for many people in the country side. However, there are some solutions to sol...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19935691318 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85022069771 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504823151125 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1486595117 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0625 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265939192284 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10379708015 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693050341806 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164758155999 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658752610755 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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