Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
Many researchers point out that the genetic factor affects greatly human psychology and mental development, while others argue that the external world is responsible for this. This essay will discuss both sides and also claims that what we have experienced through every walks of life have a profound impact on who we are going to be in the future.
When it comes to inherited characteristics, the child comes from the parents with superior genetic tends to be smarter, more dynamic and talented than other children. This is not an isolated incident when many findings have highlighted the same results. However, the children’s development also relies on a particular circumstance in which whether allow them to develop their strengths or not. Giving Chris Langan as an example, the man has the highest IQ in America, who couldn’t contribute any of his achievements to the nation because of poverty.
On the other hand, the traits we acquire from experiences and all the vicissitudes of life are constantly changing. It is the interaction of the people and the external events that shapes a person’s personality. For example, a scholar classmate sitting next to a kid should motivate him to strive to study than the bullied one. Furthermore, many people find themselves improving in every aspect of life after a long challenging journey.
In conclusion, while genetic characteristics play a vitally important role regarding human development, I shall hold the idea that the experiences we may have are the underlying factor decide the future of us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...e idea that the experiences we may have are the underlying factor decide the future...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22619047619 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06378761219 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.783035975 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.727272727 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220947293772 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683457667105 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540411836035 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122527143522 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246280466945 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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