Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Knowledge is everything. While some people suggest that freedom of expression and speech are essential for scientific researchers, businessmen and educators as well as students, others argue that information is underrated and should be charged when sharing.
Firstly, saying exchanging ideas has had an impact on our society is an understatement. Most for scientific findings, economic strategies, and learning techniques are based on some certain original ideas. Increasing the exchanging process plays a vitally important role when scientists can rely on the given ideas and make them efficient, utilitarian and reduce studied time.
However, when it comes to finance and security preferences, some ideas are too precious and valuable as if they are not treated appropriately, the consequences would be so unpredictable. For instance, applying explosives on a construction site or to open a road through a mountain is reasonable, but using them for military purposes cause war and many catastrophes.
I personally think that without sharing, people could not enhance dramatically and keep up the pace of life. The industrial, economic and educational revolution would never reach the contemporary level. But as all the questions of sharing versus not sharing, they are not mutually exclusive. People can take advantages of information for personal purposes, on the other side, scientists might feel frustrated as they found the identical breakthroughs as others had found because of not sharing ideas.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that information is powerful and can be detrimental and should be managed carefully, however, exchanging ideas more would be beneficial the most to all of us, especially in science, economy and educational field.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56589147287 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21225007866 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3429299355 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185437314047 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557695846284 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542921349825 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962302338481 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032426124908 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.