Scientists have controversial views on whether our personality is derived from our experiences in life or they are written in stone prior to our birth. I personally believe that although our heredity plays a pivotal role in our character, this is not rigid and can be changed during life.
On the one side, our genes act as a foundation for our qualities since we step into this world, as is apparent by observing infants reacting differently to the same stimuli. Scholars assert that attributes like happiness and courage are deeply rooted in one’s body and DNA. For instance, based on the studies done on the ones known as risk-takers, they proved that one part of their brain related to the sense of fear works differently than that of ordinary people. In addition, individuals from families with a depression history are more likely to suffer from the same disorder.
On the other side, people are exposed to a range of experiences since early childhood, which leads anyone through a unique story and shapes their personalities in various ways. Although researchers argue that one’s character is mostly formed since early ages, this is apparent that humankind is free to decide on their behavior. As an example, numerous psychological and self-care books are written to help people modify their attributes and improve their well-being, combined with high-quality academic investigation and services provided by therapists.
In conclusion, from my personal standpoint, the notion that our traits are unchangeable is seemingly a commonly held misconception, which is proved to be wrong by the development of professional help provided by general publications and mental health centers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30740740741 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97481195588 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9248298854 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.3 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206868841646 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756248216307 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668573171971 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120647785076 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704468298478 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.