Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes when set free. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem?
These days, there is an increasing among offenders to reoffend after serving their sentences. In my opinion, this issue can be attributed to two main reasons and several potential solutions should be adopted to eradicate it.
There are two primary reasons why criminals commit illegalities again after being released from the prison. First, prisons are the institution whose purpose is to punish wrongdoers, while there is the public outcry against being soft on crimes. In many societies, citizens argue that only the full weight of law could act as a deterrent to prevent crimes, although it did not work well. Therefore, few resources are allocated to prison programs for ex-offenders to make a fresh start to society. Also, many hardened offenders often intimidate other inmates and build networks to plan future crimes. A typical example would be the criminal gang in Brazil, who committed more heinous offences after their prison sentences.
Fortunately, authorities and politicians could take many actions to prevent further crimes of ex-offenders. In particular ,there should be more integrating programs for criminals when they have freedom. Vocational training or academic study opportunities should be implemented for prisoners to give them the chances of rehabilitation and getting jobs. A stable life with adequate income and the feeling of being cared by governments could dispel any idea of committing crimes again. Moreover, dangerous convicts should be segregated to prevent bullying or intimidation, which make ex-offenders even expert criminals, later.
In conclusion, I agree that there are two chief causes behind this case, and it is important to take possible measures mentioned to tackle this issue in order to ensure the safety of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47445255474 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86125800631 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671532846715 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3405378227 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175289238104 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596739288728 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563660876105 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888626742349 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561762428826 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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