The responsibility of bringing up children should be equally shared between mother and father.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniably true that parents play a pivotal role in bringing up youngsters towards personal maturity. Albeit the mothers are considered to be the light of every home and are the major household care providers, I completely agree that the road to maturity is undoubtedly achievable if the children would be guided by both parents.
On one hand, mothers being the stereotyped homemakers, spend considerably more time at home more than the fathers do. Having said that, admittedly, it is the female parent who takes charge of most of the nurturing life lessons a child should learn. An enormous number of life lessons varying from the most basic ones like how to accomplish simple household chores such as cooking, cleaning the house or doing the laundry, to the more complex ones, like grooming and how to be a well-grown child, indeed are thoughts to ponder coming mostly from the beloved mothers. In addition, most often, it is from the female parent the children beneficially learn about the good manners and right conducts to practice. Considerably, every mother plays a vital role in honing the offspring become better individuals.
On the other hand, the fathers being the stereotyped breadwinners, albeit do not spend much time
at home, as the mothers do, also have a vital part in bringing up children to maturity. As women being physically weaker, and men being physically stronger, it is the father’s responsibility to teach the offspring regarding accomplishment of more strenuous household chores such as equipment failures or major house damages. In addition, relating to manliness, a father enhances a child sense of courage and bravery. Furthermore, although both parents could teach the child that women and children have to be given protection, the father takes more pride in doing so, as they are more physically capable to protect their loved ones during times of danger. Nevertheless, it is important that a father equally works hand in hand with the mother as both parents nurture a child, differently.
With all that in mind, it is by no means certain that both parents essentially guide a child towards reaching a certain level of individual maturity. While the mother could initiate nurturing on the caring side and accomplishing lighter house activities, the father, however, could specialize educating the offspring about giving protection when needed, and in performing more strenuous home responsibilities. To recapitulate, the majority of the parental roles differ in many ways, some maternal roles could not be done interchangeably with the paternal roles, and vice versa. Having said that, I completely agree that both parents should have balance roles in honing the children become better and mature individual towards the succession of hurdles in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2360.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 450.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24444444444 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88951788024 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508888888889 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 733.5 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8502887621 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.5 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214954133551 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745278592504 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563016109335 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133105686271 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476848691313 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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