Researchers have shown us that average life expectancy of people increased dramatically over last few years which is due to the advancements in the field of medical science. In my opinion, although this can be seen as a great achievement and some people are happy that they can live longer, it has a negative impact at an individual and society level.
To commence with, When people live longer they can enjoy their life and spend more time with their loved ones eloquently. In olden days immortality is a boon from god. Now this achieved through well-trained doctors and advanced medical equipment. At a society level, older people can share their wisdom with others and can remove any impediments from younger generation minds. In organizations, when taking a critical decisions management can use the senior people advice and can utilize them to train junior resources.
On the other hand,there are some drawbacks having more life time for people. For one thing government has to keep up more budget for people pension plans and free medical policies. This can also dilute the population equality of younger and older generation ratio which in return has adverse effect on human relationships because younger people have an additional responsibility of taking care of older people as they can't take care of themselves. At a society level, as people live longer years they expect to work for more years and thus reducing employment opportunities for youth. Moreover, there might be a social unrest occur because there are no enough job openings for young people once they completed their education.
In nutshell, having our loved ones living for more years with us is an awesome experience, we need to consider the issues caused by this drift. So overall, its disadvantages over weigh advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...h their loved ones eloquently. In olden days immortality is a boon from god. Now thi...
^^^^
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...immortality is a boon from god. Now this achieved through well-trained doctors an...
^^
Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decisions'' or 'decision's'?
Suggestion: decisions'; decision's
...n organizations, when taking a critical decisions management can use the senior people ad...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...n junior resources. On the other hand,there are some drawbacks having more life tim...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...nd,there are some drawbacks having more life time for people. For one thing government ha...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n also dilute the population equality of younger and older generation ratio which...
^^
Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... of taking care of older people as they cant take care of themselves. At a society l...
^^^^
Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ation. In nutshell, having our loved ones living for more years with us is an awe...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, for one thing, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12162162162 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72417148863 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3181890594 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21939203129 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774783199537 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465047502497 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136096537336 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591827773447 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.