It is an undeniable fact that the development of the travel industry and the number of visitors lead to the increased need of flights which impact the environment intensively. In this essay, I would discuss the effect of aviation on the environment and bring up several solutions for the issue.
The ever-growing demand for air travel brings about the phenomenon of environmental degradation. Apparently, the more aircraft used to offer the recent travel need, the higher influx of carbon footprint emitted from jet engines, which heavily aggravates air pollution. This is additionally one of the major contributing factors of global warming and climate change. Beyond that, natural resources, especially fossil fuels, are limited and progressively exhausted because of the over exploitation and consumption of fuel by the aviation sector. This might cause fuel depletion for the future and severely affect economies and human activities as well.
Dealing with the issue thoroughly and immediately is infeasible as undoubtedly, people need time to alter it. However, some possible solutions could be applied to mitigate this phenomenon. People could invent and develop high-speed vehicles using zero-emission technology that brings in a proper replacement without impacting people's life and economy. The new machine would reduce the amount of fuel fumes exchanging into the atmosphere. Take the Shinkansen train as an example, it’s speed is as fast as a plane but pumps out no toxic fumes. Furthermore, utilizing biofuel or renewable energy such as solar energy, electricity,... is efficient in minimizing the emissions and reliance on fossil fuels. Thanks to these substitutes, people are able to improve the air quality and guarantee sustainable development in the future.
In conclusion, although there are various factors worsening the quality of air and environment, some actions still could be taken to alleviate the problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5777027027 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03461697762 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652027027027 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4343032068 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224529295075 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569592807491 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503993867756 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128359157382 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283278981482 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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