In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts while boys like science. What are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed?
Many argue that most of the art courses are occupied by women and most of the men choose the sciences at the schools and high-level education. From my perspective, several reasons could explain this tendency and may need some changes.
There are two main causes responsible for the difference in subject selections between boys and girls. Firstly, many scientists amused this selective trend is the basic distinction in the working of the human brain between the two genders. To specify, it has been proved that there are subtle differences in the mental makeup and working capacity of the male and female brain. Girls have performed better in subjects like arts because of their increased capacity to memorize facts and data. On the other hand, the male brain is one-dimensional and has more focus power than their female counterpart. While today with some brain training could gain equalise both genders. Secondly, the traditional belief is another contributing factor deciding that divergence, especially in developing countries with religious belief such as the middle east countries. Several parents oriented their girls towards the choice of artistic fields and pursue their sons to science subjects for better income in their future jobs.
However, I suppose, students must have the right to follow their desire at school and university. By continuing subjects that they interest on, they will become successful in the future. Besides, some society believes that girls are housewives and take care of the family. This attitude should be changed. Society appreciates and supports the females' idea of pursuing a career as an engineer or a scientist.
In conclusion, although girls often want to learn arts and boys will be able to like studying science more. I believe this trend should be changed. Every student should choose the subject they love regardless of their gender so that there will be more enthusiastic professionals in both art and science.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29841269841 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64199852586 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596825396825 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0026396094 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7222222222 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24497488553 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758378932443 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779859483077 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152665923653 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717013656343 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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