Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
Social media is raising among all people and increasingly popular, but more details about people in such websites are risky. This essay will discuss an internet helps us to share news and personal thought as a major advantage. While on the other hand contents available through the web is not secured because of hackers as a disadvantage.
As we all know that an Internet is today necessity which is helping us for exploring our opinions, and ideas. The information flow is quick and fast,
so people from different part of the world can easily view and get it. Social media websites are really connecting this globe into the empire, also helping people to show their information quickly. For example, Facebook and Google are practical examples, which is helping us for real-time communication. By using, such applications we are able to communicate with persons from different part of the world. This is helping us to save time, and make easy explorations.
Although, An internet is the most unsecured place to share content and personal details. A different person is using the internet for various purpose like computer hackers are using web for pirating and making copies of information, and selling such information, or misusing such data is helping for the crime. Last year, Russian student hacked Nepal telecom where they make tracks of all calls, and messages which was the major incident for Nepal. Different political leaders of India used that information, which directly reflects the political instability of the government. Such accent makes people insecure so that limited websites use and warn them not to share confidential information online.
In conclusion, the Internet helps us to share information and let us communicate in real-time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21830985915 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77684548705 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5290255682 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140396042073 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511972997172 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728298702175 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840232882052 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559163890628 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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