Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?

Essay topics:

Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?

In today's world social media has played a great role in people's daily life. Advertisement, social programs have making people to know about the new products in the market and making them to use them to have a easy life. I think that, these marketing strategic is playing a vital role in publicity of new goods and services in the today world.

I believe that social media has influence mass to purchase the products. Facebook, instagram, twitter and other various application that people use today is providing them information about these new arrival of the company. People are inspired with these stuff reviews and they are leading nation in a commercial world. Inventions of new cosmetic product i market and promoting it with social medial people rush to buy these product and see the result.

However, people believe less in the advertisement of social media these days, still they wanna give it a try to use those goods. Online shopping are providing people home delivery services in home which has made people easier to buy it as soon as possible. The marketing strategic is providing buy two get one free and people are hurry to purchase their product and use them. Thus, these strategic is influencing people test their product.

To sum up, I believe that social media has a superior role in human life because without social media people are not believing in any product they buy. Therefore i can say that for high sell so goods and service social media marketing plays the significant role in consumer buy.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this product' or 'these products'?
Suggestion: this product; these products
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, i think, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88076923077 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46764566904 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6023543534 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.6153846154 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132782390261 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619869067267 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495143074567 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992634858521 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490006202919 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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