Some people say that the only reason for learning forging language is in order to travel to or work in foreign country.other say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
In my opinion learning foreign language is important for not only work or study and travel but for understanding the culture and their way of life also.
Firstly, leaning foreign language makes us aware about the people and their way of thinking.Students who are travelling for their higher study i foreign land should have knowledge about their language in order to survive and deal with other peoples.
For examples if i am travelling to china then i need to have knowledge about language because people in china don't speak any other language, Otherwise ill be in trouble at that movement.
Secondly, foreign language plays great role in making people feel it's their own place.People travel,work and study in foreign land and when the language that we've learn is the mother-language we can feel the environment is our own.It creates the familiar environment for the people.Learning the language also helps people in difficult situation.For examples if someone lost their way during the travel, dealing with the market people transportation etc. With the language many problems will be solved
In conclusion, learning foreign language makes people aware as well as plays great role in people daily life in foreign land.Thus,learning the foreign language will help to improve the life in foreign country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2619047619 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98168635419 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538095238095 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.412642913 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.0 106.682146367 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.8 7.06120827912 351% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342521245406 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205764910301 0.084324248473 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695768799588 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208860978629 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072963766629 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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