In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Over the last few years, one of the most alarming issue in both developed and developing countries is the considerable increase in population’s average weight. This essay will analyse some possible causes and carry out several measures to address the problem.
A prominent reason explaining why so many people are overweight is that they consume too much unhealthy food. The rapid development of fast food franchises and the continuously introduction of new processed products make us form a bad eating habit. Being exposed to a wide range of high-calorie, sugary and oily choices, will sooner or later, lead to the uncontrollable bodyweight. Therefore, to tackle this problem, creating a healthier way of living is a must. It is the best for people to cook on their own and adjust the nutritional needs, but if the heavy workload prevents us from doing so, make sure to choose meals wisely, with low-carb foods, lots of greens and a moderate portion of red meat.
Another culprit worth mentioning is our lack of physical activities. Working at the office or studying at school takes most of our day time, so people will less likely to spend the remaining hours taking up exercises. In addition, the sedentary lifestyles also contribute to the growing cases of obesity when a large percentage of the world population are turning to couch potatoes, preferring watching TV to working out. However, this issue could be addressed by running health campaigns to raise people’s awareness; for instance, advice on how to make balance meals, keep in shape or check medical symptoms was informed through a health promotion in Australian. The organizer also had a group of trainers instructing short exercises which were easy to follow and do on a daily basis. These activities not only promote public physical condition but also convene and focus world-wide attention on health deteriorations.
All in all, obesity is now an increasingly worrying issue that pulls our fitness down and raises more health matters. Hence, everyone should look after their own physical abilities, and more actions must be taken urgently, otherwise our societies will face even greater medical issues in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2191011236 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87368611673 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693820224719 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2213497154 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.866666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172806260362 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457502867745 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364935585489 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098273877309 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349798365206 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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