In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
There is a widespread agreement that while the body mass of human is climbing up, what reversed are their health and fitness. This phenomena takes place spontaneously when the citizens' living standard has been raised recently. A great number of factors would be taken into account before offering any measures.
First and foremost, it is evident that eating diets put huge impacts on out health changes. In modern time, more and more people, especially children and teenagers, are into fast food despite the fact that it contains substantial amount of fat, gluten which lead to obesity. With its special taste, convenience as well as cheap price, junk food lessen our conceive about its negative influence on health and shape of body. Another undoubted element which is in charge of this issue would be the people's lifestyle. Apparently, overweight is the outcome of hardly doing exercises and a host of human beings do not realise its advantages towards their lives. In addition, there are increasingly preferences to jobs that do not require many movings and keep sitting in front of computers day by day. As a result, these employees are prone to obesity and lack of agility.
On the other hand, based on different aspects analysed above, some viable solutions can be taken to tackle this problem. Countries have to give incentives for people to work out more through sport events such as marathon campaigns in order to boost their awareness of staying healthy. They also need to propagate the unforeseen consequences of consuming fast food excessively or educate students to constrain eating these food. Last but not least, it is vital that people should go to see the doctor for regular health evaluation and take advices for better diets.
In conclusion, obesity is a major issue that most people are confronting everyday. Therefore, it is a must for them to reach the balance in their lifestyles and diets.
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06603773585 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59836166216 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654088050314 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3070595033 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198968735144 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525867280564 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349160299359 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103873237364 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017226972133 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.