In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In many nations, people’s weight has increased as well as their both mental and physical health has also reduced significantly recently due to some major reasons. However, there are plenty of solutions which could be done to resolve the issue.
There are several causes which lead to the fact that people are gaining weight and their health condition is declining gradually. Firstly, due to a large amount of unhealthy food consumed by citizens daily that their health is afflicted tremendously. Fastfood, confectionery, bubble tea, and unfresh food are the primary reason for the reduction of health. In fact, consuming that food for a long time makes people gain weight and increases changes to have some health problems like obesity, diabetes, heart diseases and the like. Additionally, the sedentary lifestyle which can be seen among office workers and students also contributes greatly to the issue. Workers who work with computers from nine to five and children who like playing computer games and watching TV are prone to obesity and back diseases since they are lack of exercise. Therefore, the food which is consumed daily and citizens’ lifestyle is the main factor which causes the concerning problems.
However, there are numerous effective measures that people should take to mitigate the above issues. The first immediate action is to encourage people to have healthy and organic food instead of the bad one. Governments should allow businesses to open more stores and restaurants to sell healthy food at an affordable price near schools and working areas. Moreover, there should be more campaigns to educate people, especially housewives, on how to choose food which less sugar and how to distinguish between fresh and poisoned food. Only by doing so can people health increase significantly. Another proactive method is to encourage people to do exercise regularly. Employers should open gyms inside offices for workers to do exercise in break time or after work. In addition to that, outside activities like team building games, tracking competitions, free car days, and the like should be organized regularly to encourage people to walk and do physical activities frequently.
In short, the phenomenon that people are gaining weight which results severely in their health condition is caused by some reasons. However, the issues can be tackled by several strong measures which are mentioned above. Governments should allocate more money in campaigns to change people lifestyle for better lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in fact, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36432160804 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69928424793 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9680810147 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201578242571 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684156132017 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056720649451 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140216085402 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235829392067 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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