The world economy is travelling at fast paced, following with an explosion of diverse jobs and industry that attract many service along with it. Fast food industry is created in the notion of providing fast dining service for anyone who needs it. Some people claiming that it is devastated for people's health as too much fast food can cause adverse effect on every facet. However, I personally feel that it is not reasonable for goverments to apply greater burden on fast food industry and I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, fast food service attract customers who have relatively lower income because of their price, or people who find it hard to spare time to make a homecook or going out for a proper meal. Applying a new tax on fast food does not push them away from enjoying a quick meal from KFC or Mc Donald's, unless they are provided with a faster service with appealing price from another types of food. Furthermore, I doublty say that the abrubt change in price will not cause any further stress in the society since now individuals pay a greater amount for the same type of food, with no change in quality and no other alternatives. Finally, instead of imposing new tax law, there are many more ideal solutions to control health issue such as: decreasing medicine's price and doctor's prescriptions fee to encourage people seeking doctore whenever an ailment occurs.
On the other side of the debate, people emphasize on irrevocable effects of fast food with health argue that fast food industry should endure a higher tax so as to lower the scores of food being produced. However, fast food service is an desirable industry which generates an enormous amount of profit so organizations are unlike to increase their price to compete in price war but decrease the overall quaily or quantity of their products. The last consuming customers have to endure this tragic situation.
Afterall, I think a greater tax is not a reasonable choice at all and goverments can rely on different methods
I'm just tired to check
I'm just tired to check everything one last time
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: lowed; lowered
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Did you mean 'after all'?
Suggestion: After all
...ave to endure this tragic situation. Afterall, I think a greater tax is not a reasona...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, as to, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84057971014 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51833186437 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0642932297 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.166666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277567882054 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107214157621 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705972855477 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15838080859 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799928190396 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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