In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
The imposing of tax on the fast food can act as solution for major health problems created by these foods in many countries. In my opinion, I agree to the point of increasing the tax may act as solution to the problem but I also believe in creating awareness among people about fast foods will be alternative.
The insurgence of fast food has resulted in many problems in the countries. Firstly, the local businesses are facing the major cut down in income due to effect of these food joints. Youth are highly attracted to these foods which are creating the hinges in the local market and restaurants. Secondly, high content of carbohydrates, fatty acids and unnatural dyes are creating health hazards such as obesity, diabetics and cancer. Therefore there is increasing pressure on the health departments and government to find solution to this insurgence.
On the one hand, government imposing taxes on the fast food may act as major route towards decreasing the effects of these foods. The tax imposed on the food aid in increased consumer costs of foods which will deter the youngsters in buying them. The excise on these will also reduce the opening of many multinational restaurants such as KFC, Domino etc. On the other hand, increasing awareness among people about the ill effects the food in school, colleges and communities may act as alternative solution. Educating children and adults about these foods not only decrease the fame but also discourage people leaning towards these foods in their busy schedule. For instance, Parents discourage the children in buying and eating pizzas and burgers if they know the effects of such food on their health.
In conclusion, hazardous effects of the fast food in the country can be mitigated by integrative approach such as tax imposition, awareness programs, and cooperative efforts of both government and health departments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0935483871 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74277216836 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487096774194 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2771566701 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.785714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298326600508 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121352435988 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700233800635 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198068529724 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418418998162 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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