In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
These days, people have been likely to live alone especially in the metropolises in developed countries. Personally, I consider that this growing trend could have both a positive and negative aspect.
On the one hand, living alone can bring several benefits to either an individual’s life or the whole economy’s development. First, by choosing not to marry, single people would have chances to contribute their own skills. In fact, the single life would require people to be less reliance on parents and give more freedom than people who live with their family, especially they have to learn how to take care themselves and manage their own budget. Second, to some extent, this tendency towards living alone can have a great positive impact on the country’s economy. For instance, in order to satisfy the demand on households from rasing in the number of single people, the construction industry, estate agent and housing-related companies need to be far more improved.
On the other hand, there is a myriad of negative consequences from living alone. First, besides being independence, people who prefer being alone have to experience some kind of feelings including homesick, loneliness and even isolation. More significantly, since nowadays, the cost of living has been higher than in the past, so as the result single person without any support or aid from relative have to deal with the burden of households bills and other expenditure. In addition, from an economic perspective, a small number of businesses could push up the rental and other household-related expenses, which put more pressure on those who choose to live alone.
In conclusion, living alone in modern life has become more and more popular and can benefit in many ways. However, it also brings drawback not only the individual but also the entire country’s economy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...addition, from an economic perspective, a small number of businesses could push up the rental and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25418060201 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94608396772 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588628762542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6022567279 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288900449012 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100885583691 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581970812401 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176027251958 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388728047719 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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