In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?
Home is a basic necessity of life. It’s a place we come back to at the end of the day when we are exhausted by our daily lives. In some countries people prefer to rent houses while in others it’s important to buy your own property. In this essay I will discuss some causes for this and explain why I think it’s a good thing to own a house.
In today’s uncertain economy, home ownership provides an inexpensive accommodation and a good investment simultaneously. Renting can be expensive, especially in cities where it’s become almost impossible to live for an average family. Its makes more sense to pay a monthly mortgage than rent because at the end of it you own a home. A home that can be used as a refuge in your old age or even by your children. In a recent Galop poll, when asked why people preferred to own home, most given answer was it being more economical option. Secondly, it’s also a good investment to own a piece of property. In addition to being the safest option, it also has good returns. The statistics from year 2020 showed that when all other forms of businesses took a plunge during the pandemic, property prices actually went up a little.
This trend towards buying rather than renting has raised some questions but I believe that this is a positive development. The first benefit is the peace of mind it brings to the owners. They don’t have to worry about rising rent, inflation or evictions whereas renters live in an almost constant apprehension. It also allows people more freedom to be creative with their property by adding or removing different features which is never possible with a leased property. The other benefit is the reduction in homelessness. When more citizens are encouraged to own homes, the risk of unexpected evictions is decreased. The recent US survey showed that cities with high numbers of leased homes also had higher incidence of homelessness.
In conclusion, people choose to own homes because it’s cheaper and also a safe investment. In my opinion this is a positive trend as it brings peace of mind and also helps to tackle homelessness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nk it’s a good thing to own a house. In today’s uncertain economy, home ownersh...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cause at the end of it you own a home. A home that can be used as a refuge in you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76630434783 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69703243064 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551630434783 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9124284276 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5238095238 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5238095238 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311022196007 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798362992599 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836169085877 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187991528071 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555442519473 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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