Some countries require young people to serve in the military.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?
No one can neglect the fact that countries are safe because of Armed Forces, while we sit peacefully at home they are fighting for us. And also it’s everyone’s responsibility to serve the nation in one or the other way. Though the most potential beings to do the same are young people and also some countries need to promote youth to be an part of military. Even though, this has both positives and negatives in doing this.
If everyone will be supporting the nation, workforce will be increased and it will benefit us more than expected. The youth is considered to be a crucial part everywhere and so is the case for being a military official. Young people have a very new way to look at things may it be with respect to technology or anything. Now a days also a lot of inventions are being done by teens only with minimal support and guidance of elders, a lot of reports have also clarified that the new joiners in military are more productive and enthusiastic than those that are already there. In Some countries like India, youths are more in ratio to other age group people, so they must be encouraged to go and be a part of armed forces.
Besides being Practical enough, Some new generations people don’t have a mindset of doing so because of the drawbacks. As being a part of nation’s military don’t always benefits, sometimes it can revert back in unexpected life loosing ways which is the biggest disadvantage. Youngsters life is not only involved with them but of their families also and obviously no one wants their child to just go away from them. Though, this is highly acceptable that new ways, new approaches towards seeing the world are beneficial to us but sometimes it can be risky to them.
To sum up, As this is about our country everything is acceptable. But not everyone can do this in reality. As long as there is courage involved people can easily cross any hurdle and same is the case with countries that require youth to go into military. In my opinion, Pros and cons of this should be taught to everyone and then it is up to them if they find it useful or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60789473684 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63575983673 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9012781482 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15767548753 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600722391791 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566565722274 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116385814742 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700101326761 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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